This game has potential. I mean a lot. Some things are off (like how the police was knocking at the door but when the character opened the door they were in the car.) but its pretty easy to solve.
The gameplay is short yet captivating because you dont know what will happen next. The art is beautiful, and the scripting doesnt have many problems. But a good way to make the game a little bit better is to give a little more info about everything. I could see the format of "Letters/Written pages" that can be found in the drawers that could describe the monster/ how everything started/ past's characters experience (that didn't survive).
Nice game!